Morning, Pt. 1
Sorry for the day mix-up gang. I made it a double comic to make up for it.
Some of you might recognize parts of this comic. I mean, I HOPE you recognize them, that’s my goal here. The little scenes in here refer back all the way back to this comic: http://sbboard.com/2011/04/roto%D1%8F/
Here’s a side by side comparison:
Your art has improved a lot since that old comic, but I’d honestly say I prefer the old version. The candle seems to hold more presence and carry the emotion of the scene better, where Mask Boy is overwhelmed and pushed to the back of the panel. I also think the starker blues and reds place more emphasis on those colors. But I’m not an artist so what am I saying lawl
Thanks for your feedback dude! A problem that occurs when you redraw things is that they become a little stiffer each time you redraw them. But to have polish you gotta spend some time on redrawing, so some stiffness is hard to avoid. I’m trying to work on finding a balance between dynamic drawings and polished drawings.